A Place Called Monaco

31st May 2021, 12:00 AM in Iron Man 2
A Place Called Monaco
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Author Notes:

31st May 2021, 12:00 AM
Fun note, Hammer's Perception is so bad that Kevin didn't even think it was worth rolling for him.

Also, first actual acknowledgment of Happy Hogan!

Comments:

31st May 2021, 1:09 AM
Otaku
Good thing the boxes are color-coded. Not to nitpick, but I had to stop and think if Rob's lines were coming from him or if Hammer had a miscolored word balloon. ;)

Full disclosure: for all I know, this is the optimal layout. XP
31st May 2021, 7:32 AM
Yeaaaaaah, not the best speech bubble placement, honestly I thought the next-to-last panel's was a little worse, but I'm always cautious of flipping panels because I'm deathly afraid there's going to be some lettering I missed in the actual shot that ended up backwards.

Granted, mirroring probably wouldn't have helped the last panel, but I couldn't pass up the image of Hammer leaning to the side making that face. XD

I appreciate the critique, if I run into a similar problem again (and I'm sure I will) I'll play around with some more ideas, see if I can make it clearer in the future.
31st May 2021, 10:34 AM
Otaku
Thank you. I am glad that the criticism was understood as intended: to be constructive. :) Like I said, I wasn't sure how to make it better, and you've confirmed you noticed it might be a problem so... yeah. XD
8th Jun 2021, 6:06 PM
With how Rob's been playing, I can definitely see what's next coming from his devious mind.
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