Good thing the boxes are color-coded. Not to nitpick, but I had to stop and think if Rob's lines were coming from him or if Hammer had a miscolored word balloon. ;)
Full disclosure: for all I know, this is the optimal layout. XP
Yeaaaaaah, not the best speech bubble placement, honestly I thought the next-to-last panel's was a little worse, but I'm always cautious of flipping panels because I'm deathly afraid there's going to be some lettering I missed in the actual shot that ended up backwards.
Granted, mirroring probably wouldn't have helped the last panel, but I couldn't pass up the image of Hammer leaning to the side making that face. XD
I appreciate the critique, if I run into a similar problem again (and I'm sure I will) I'll play around with some more ideas, see if I can make it clearer in the future.
Thank you. I am glad that the criticism was understood as intended: to be constructive. :) Like I said, I wasn't sure how to make it better, and you've confirmed you noticed it might be a problem so... yeah. XD
Author Notes:
Also, first actual acknowledgment of Happy Hogan!